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// On :Tuesday, June 19, 2012
Case:
Do you think that people should be obliged to work 65
hours a week?
Solusion:
People's needs would not be enough. Their needs
also must be completed. As we knew that they should get job to suffice it all.
There is no doubt if we cannot suffice it all because we don't have any job to
live in this large community. In the following case, I will give my opinion
about it.
There is positive and negative effects which we will get in
this case. The positive effect about it is we can be trusted by clients that
we are professional worker. Otherwise, the people in the world recognise we
have more time to work, I think the head of office will give us more
appreciation and we can get extra money for our work. And the negative effect
is we can get bad health than normal workers. Moreover, if we have bad medical
check-up, I imagine if they should be obliged to work until 65 per a week, it
will disturb their own self. The other negative effect is we don’t have many
times to get together with our family or friends. Because of it, we tend to be difficult
to join the society.
To sum up, I think they must consider about the job and
think if they choose it, what will they get and what will they sacrifice. I
disagree if they ignore their heatlh and work too hard, they will regret what happens
next about his medical result. It makes their body will be bad and cannot work
anymore. I recommend if you have these options, you should think it carefully
and listen what they say about that job.